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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Writing Blog Comments

Before and after 
Blog comments  

This week we have been learning how to write a structured blog comment. Here are some comments  before and after.

BEFORE-



My comment has no capital to start and has a lower case I and no punctuation at the end.

AFTER
This comment has a capital letter to start and punctuation to end,capital for names and a capital I.

 This has helped my writing because now I know how to set out a comment or a letter.
Thanks Miss Waho.
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2 comments:

  1. Lee-Anne WahoJuly 6, 2016 at 12:28 PM

    Kia ora Izzy.
    No worries. I am glad you have made progress and can recognise what a quality comment looks like and includes.
    I am looking forward to seeing your future comments.
    Tau kē.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2016 at 10:55 AM

    Kia ora Izzy.
    Hi Izzy Sita here that post of yours is nice.
    I like how you wrote down the things that helps you remember it.
    While you were writing, you forgot to put a space between end and capital.
    I wonder how long it took you to remember to put all of that punctuation and capital letters in it.
    Keep up the AWESOME work!

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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about

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