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Friday, November 25, 2016

How the magic world lived




We are learning to edit our work.
By the way anything in brown is what i did today

5 comments:

  1. Hello Izzy
    I love this but they have been dating for six years shouldent he have taken her on more dates.
    I love this to bits it is awsome I aspessily love the caleb part.
    this is awasome

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  2. Salam Izzy, Sameer here.
    This is a funny and really good story. It's like reading a real book. I like how you have put Caleb in the story.
    Blog you later.

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  3. Hello Izzy it is Tamara here.
    How long did it take you to make you slide?
    Did you do it in reading?
    Well Done.

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  4. Hi Izzy this story you made was really funny I liked in fact I loved it , you are so creative . Hopefully you make more cool storys.

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  5. Hey Izzy it's Summer
    I really like the name that you picked
    for the dark man caleb was a good name
    for the dark man lol. Anyway I this is a
    really good story how long did this take
    to make this slid??????

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