Basic body paragraph:
PEEL
Point ( state your point) E.g - Throughout the novel ' Abomination', Martha is bullied at school.
Evidence ( Provide evidence to support your point) E.g - An example of bulling is the incident in the toilet with the girls when they through the water over the stall onto her. When she came out of the stall the called her slut ad punched her in the stomach, That made her vomit. This made Martha feel angry and upset.
Explain ( Explain what your point demonstrated) E.g - unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bulling by students toward Martha, There was an imbalance of her power between the Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.
Link ( write a sentence linking to the next paragraph) E.g - Another way Martha experiences suffering is at home with her parents.
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