Monday, August 6, 2018
Writing.
She saw it coming from around the corner, It was running very fast and it didn't seem to be slowing down. It looked like a cute dog before she had no idea how it turned into the monster, Like what happened to its cute ears. Now its a wolf like monster with huge fangs and big ugly pointy ears. She couldn't go on running this fast, she was going to trip and fall. Oh no ...
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What a cliffhanger! I really enjoyed being able to read some more of your writing Izzy. I look forward to maybe hearing the next part of this story.
ReplyDeleteGood job today during free writing.
- Miss Birtch